Advantage of the Internet
학생이 쓴 원문
The main advantage of the Internet is access to information.
I can search lots of information that i wanted and study easy.
And I can buy that I needed.
I always rely on Internet.
I can't imagine my life without Internet.
If I couldn't do it, I wouldn't do anything!
It's comfortable enough for me to do anything by Internet.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] ^^
Thanks for internet I can talk to you and send you this.
It is truly nice to have internet make things better and easier for us.
For a student like you , I think that access to research is the best benefit.
Use your articles and verbs properly.
Take care.^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
The main advantage of the Internet is access to information.
>> CORRECT
OR> Main access to information is one very good use for the internet.I can search lots of information that i wanted and study easy.
>> I can search lots of information that I wanted and study easily.And I can buy that I needed.
>> And I can buy what I need.I always rely on Internet.
>> I always rely on the Internet.I can\'t imagine my life without Internet.
>> CORRECT
OR> It would be difficult without internet.If I couldn\'t do it, I wouldn\'t do anything!
>> CORRECT
OR> If I cant have it, it would be useless.It\'s comfortable enough for me to do anything by Internet
>> It\'s comfortable enough for me to do anything by using the Internet.
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