Advantage of the Internet

2014-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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The main advantage of the Internet is access to information. I can search lots of information that i wanted and study easy. And I can buy that I needed. I always rely on Internet. I can't imagine my life without Internet. If I couldn't do it, I wouldn't do anything! It's comfortable enough for me to do anything by Internet.

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  Hi there [이름] ^^   Thanks for internet I can talk to you and send you this. It is truly nice to have internet make things better and easier for us. For a student like you , I think that access to research is the best benefit.   Use your articles and verbs properly.   Take care.^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   The main advantage of the Internet is access to information. >> CORRECT OR> Main access to information is one very good use for the internet.I can search lots of information that i wanted and study easy. >> I can search lots of information that I wanted and study easily.And I can buy that I needed. >> And I can buy what I need.I always rely on Internet. >> I always rely on the Internet.I can\'t imagine my life without Internet. >> CORRECT OR> It would be difficult without internet.If I couldn\'t do it, I wouldn\'t do anything! >> CORRECT OR> If I cant have it, it would be useless.It\'s comfortable enough for me to do anything by Internet >> It\'s comfortable enough for me to do anything by using the Internet.

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