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Working with different someone is not comfortable.
I have to understand, be considerate, be patient, even if I don`t fit in with.
But as we tried I feel like learning.
When I work someone like me I think it `will be comfortable.
But if it gest too used to, it can be a little loose and less tense.
Both have pros cons.
I think it depends on my thoughts and attitudes.
Eventually, as we bumping into each other and breaking into, we are beco[이름]g round stones than keen stones
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Working with different someone is not comfortable.
>> Working with different people is uncomfortable.
>> I have to understand,be considerate, and patient even if I don\'t fit in.
>> But, I work with them, I learn a lot.
>> If I work with someone who is the same as me, it will be comfortable.
>> It will also feel loose and less tense.
>> Both have pros and cons.
>> I think it depends on the person\'s thoughts and attitudes.
>> Eventually, as we bump into each other, we will become round stones then keen stones.
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