Advantages and disadvantages of homeschooling.
학생이 쓴 원문
Good thing: 1. It\'s good that you don\'t prepare to go out.
2. Solving all the questions will give you time to rest.
Bad things:1.I can\'t meet my frinds.
2. I can\'t hear the details of the problem.
3. I can\'t make memories with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름] [이름]!
(^___^)
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
You had the right ideas to begin with. However, I made some modifications for you to review later on.
I will see you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
Good thing:
1. It\'s good that you don\'t prepare to go out.
>>> It\'s good because you don\'t have to prepare to go out.
2. Solving all the questions will give you time to rest.
2. Solving all the questions will give you time to rest.
>>> You\'ll have time to rest after solving all the questions.
Bad things:
1.I can\'t meet my frinds.
>>> I can\'t meet my friends.
2. I can\'t hear the details of the problem.
2. I can\'t hear the details of the problem.
>>> CORRECT
3. I can\'t make memories with my friends.
3. I can\'t make memories with my friends.
>>> CORRECR
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