Advantages and Disadvantages of pedal power in schools
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Hi Ji Su! ^^
a great Tuesday afternoon! ^^
This article can be really interesting. :)
Thank you for sharing your opinion and thoughts about it.
I\'ll see you in class. :)
Teacher Glenda
In the USA, some teachers are starting to use pedals in school.
>> Correct
These pedals could prevent students from being restless, or tapping their feet.
>> Correct
I think the advantages of pedal power are that these pedals could prevent students from being restless or tapping their feet like I said.
>> I think the advantage of using the pedal power is, it can prevent students from being restless or from tapping their feet when they are bored.
Because of that, the pedals could make their grades D to A+.
>> Correct
On the other hand, the disadvantages of these pedals are that they could be tired on P.E class.
>> On the other hand, the disadvantage of these pedals is, the students will be tired in P.E class.
When they are pedalling on class, they could be very thirsty and hungry.
>> When they are pedaling in class, they can easily get thirsty and hungry.
But every students can\'t go out to the bathroom or the fauset every class.
>> And the students can\'t go out to go to the bathroom or faucet every class.
Even there are many disadvantages, I hope we have these things in Korea or our school.
>>Even if there are many disadvantages, I hope we can have these things in Korea or in our school.
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