Advantages of booking earlier
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When l have a travel plan for other countries, I usually book a flight ticket earlier to get a cheap ticket. About three months before I leave, I check the prices of my flight ticket almost every day. Comparing the daily prices, I can find and book a reasonable ticket. It usually takes two weeks to book a nice ticket. To get a reasonable ticket, I have to put my efforts and time like everything in a business.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! Booking seats in advance allows us to choose cheaper flights, but like you said, you have to put in effort and time to look for them.
- T. Caitlyn
When l have a travel plan for other countries, I usually book a flight ticket earlier to get a cheap ticket.
>> When I have a travel plan to another country, I usually book a flight ticket early to get a cheaper price.
About three months before I leave, I check the prices of my flight ticket almost every day.
>> About three months before I leave, I check flight ticket prices almost every day.
Comparing the daily prices, I can find and book a reasonable ticket.
>> CORRECT
It usually takes two weeks to book a nice ticket.
>> CORRECT
To get a reasonable ticket, I have to put my efforts and time like everything in a business.
>> To get a reasonably priced ticket, I have to put in a lot of time and effort, just like in business.
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