Advantages of having a car
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I think the biggest advantage of having my own car is that I could go wherever, whenever I want. If I get a license, I will go travel right away. Also now, I’m renting a house near my school. However, if I had a car, I could drive to the school and save the money. Additionally, I could give my parents a ride when they need. they and I both are really looking for that situations.
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-T. Gabby
I think the biggest advantage of having my own car is that I could go wherever, whenever I want.
>> Correct.
If I get a license, I will go travel right away.
>> Correct.
Also now, I’m renting a house near my school.
>> Correct.
However, if I had a car, I could drive to the school and save the money.
>> However, if I have a car, I can drive to school and save more money.
Additionally, I could give my parents a ride when they need.
>> Correct.
They and I both are really looking for that situations.
>> We are all looking forward to that.
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