Advantages of having hobbies

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~~ Teacher Sharon

Sometimes we face silent moments when it comes to meeting someone in the first time.

>> Sometimes we face awkward moments when it comes to meeting someone for the first time.

Asking about other’s hobby might be one of good questions that can break the ice.

>> Asking about another’s hobby might be a good way to break the ice.
As it can be a general question, most people have their own favorites for free time.

>> As this is a general question, most people have their own preferences in how they spend their free time.

Having and doing hobbies can be precious resource in our life.

>> Hobbies can be a precious part of our lives.

By doing hobbies we can relieve stress and be relaxed.

>> By enjoying our hobbies, we can relieve our stress and become relaxed.

In addition, it gives people a chance for being in social networks by sharing hobbies.

>> In addition, it gives people a chance to improve their social skills with people who have the same hobbies as theirs.

Some people even find new career by chance while enjoying their hobby.

>> Some people even find a new career path by chance while enjoying their hobbies.

I personally encourage people to find what they like so that they can have joyful life.

>> I personally encourage people to find what they like so that they can have a joyful life.