Advantages of working in a big corporation
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First, those who are working for a big company don\'t worry about the future of the company and the security of their employment. And they enjoy various welfare systems. The children whose parent works for a big company can attend schools with the company\'s scholarship, even university. Above all, the workers get big wage and additional benefits.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! Even though the competition is very tight in big companies, their benefits and the financial stability they provide still outweigh their disadvantages, so a lot of people still prefer working there.
- T. Caitlyn
First, those who are working for a big company don\'t worry about the future of the company and the security of their employment.
>> First, those who work for a big company don’t worry about the company’s future or the security of their employment.
And they enjoy various welfare systems.
>> CORRECT
The children whose parent works for a big company can attend school with the company\'s scholarship, even university.
>> CORRECT
Above all, the workers get big wage and additional benefits.
>> Above all, the workers receive high wages and additional benefits.
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