Adventure
학생이 쓴 원문
I am sometimes going to the mountain taking my adventures on the big stones.
I am also used to the animal zoo with my family for new adventure.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I am sometimes going to the mountain taking my adventures on the big stones.
>> I sometimes go to the mountains to take adventures walking on big stones.
I am also used to the animal zoo with my family for new adventure.
I am also used to the animal zoo with my family for new adventure.
>> I also used to go to the zoo with my family for new adventures.
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