adventure things
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I don\'t remember the most adventurous thing when I did as a child.
But one of the most adventurous things is recently i did the Night Walk, That was walk a 42 kilometers from 8 p.m. to 8 p.m. the next day.
It was very hard and tired and very adventure things.
At that time, I really wanted to quit,
but I endured and finished the race.
I couldn\'t walk for a few days because of the aftereffects,
but now that I think about it, it was a proud experience.
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Hi [이름]!
I miss hiking :)
Thank you!
I don\'t remember the most adventurous thing when I did as a child.
>>> I don\'t remember being the most adventurous as a child.
But one of the most adventurous things is recently i did the Night Walk,
>>> But one of the most adventurous things is that I recently went on a night walk.
That was walk a 42 kilometers from 8 p.m. to 8 p.m. the next day.
>>> It was a 42-kilometer walk from 8 p.m. to 8 p.m. the next day.
It was very hard and tired and very adventure things.
>>> It was very hard and tiring and very adventurous.
At that time, I really wanted to quit,but I endured and finished the race.
>>> At that time, I really wanted to quit, but I endured and finished the race.
I couldn\'t walk for a few days because of the aftereffects, but now that I think about it, it was a proud experience.
>>> I couldn\'t walk for a few days because of the aftereffects, but now that I think about it, it was a proud experience.
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