Adventures I want to enjoy
학생이 쓴 원문
I think both men and women are adventurous. I guess it just depends on the person\'s personality. In the future, I would like to try extreme sports(For example : bungee jumping and paragliding) or go on an adventure to visit many countries.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think both men and women are adventurous.
>>> CORRECT!
I guess it just depends on the person\'s personality.
>>> CORRECT!
In the future, I would like to try extreme sports(For example : bungee jumping and paragliding) or go on an adventure to visit many countries.
>>> In the future, I would like to try extreme sports (For example bungee jumping and paragliding) or go on an adventure to visit many countries.
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