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Hi Sophia!! ^^ Thank you for your composition. You did great. I provided you some corrections on your sentences. See you in class. Take care!^^ __Teacher Nica__   Enjoy the great taste of Ruggles made with natural ingredient. >> Correct! It gives the best taste with potato chip, >> It gives the best taste with potato chips. Ruggles with new natural ingredient. >> Ruggles made of with new natural ingredients. The new chip with 100% natural ingredient is actually heathier. >> Correct! But It keeps original taste and satisfactory crunch. >> Correct! Now you are healthier with your favorite chip of your favorite taste. >> Correct! The silk road is the most famous road in history of trade. >> Correct! It is not just a road but a collection of ancient routes that linked asia and europe. >> Correct! (Please capitalize the word Asia and Europe) Through several centuries, merchants transported prodcuts such as chinese silk or india perfume through this road. >> Correct! But traveling this route was not easy. >> Correct! Caravans of camel had to step out carefully on mountain covered with sand of desert and ice to reach to the destination. >> Correct! Winning a tennis tournament is not big news. >> Winning a tennis tournament is not a big news. But if the winner were 90 years old, what do you think? >> Correct! Charles Hume, a retired engineer, won the USTA National Senior Hard Court Championships by defeating three rivals in a series of round robin match >> Correct! (Please don\'t forget your punctuation mark after the sentence - period)