Advertisements of the e-mail
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I have so much received the e-mail advertisements concerned
the estate agents, bank profit rates and motor\'s insurance rates, etc.
by my e-mail account. Otherwise, I would obtain some advertisement
when I think of the better rates or cheaper prices than other kind of advertisements.
But I would promptly delete an unusable advertisement from my e-mail
such as the cosmetics, plastic surgery and instant food advertisements.
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Hello [이름]!
Apologies for sending the suggestions only today because we had our preparation for our dead loved ones. Anyway, kindly go over the explanations I made below to make your sentences even better.
Thank you for doing your homework and see you in class again tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
the estate agents, bank profit rates and motor\'s insurance rates, etc.
by my e-mail account.
>> I have so many received e-mail advertisements concerning
the estate agents, bank profit rates, and motor\'s insurance rates, etc.
in my e-mail account.
the estate agents, bank profit rates, and motor\'s insurance rates, etc.
in my e-mail account.
EXPLANATION: 1.) Use \"many\" instead of \"much\" because \"e-mail advertisements\" is a countable noun.
2.) Use \"concerning\" which means \"about\" instead of \"concerned\" which means \"care for\".
3.) Use \"in my e-mail\" instead of \"by\" because by means a source or where something came from.
But I would promptly delete an unusable advertisement from my e-mail
such as the cosmetics, plastic surgery and instant food advertisements.
Otherwise, I would obtain some advertisement
when I think of the better rates or cheaper prices than other kind of advertisements.
when I think of the better rates or cheaper prices than other kind of advertisements.
>> Correct!
Or: ...other kinds of advertisements.
EXPLANATION: \"Other\" needs to be plural because you used \"advertisements\" which is also plural.
But I would promptly delete an unusable advertisement from my e-mail
such as the cosmetics, plastic surgery and instant food advertisements.
>> Correct!
Or: But I would promptly delete an unusable advertisement from my e-mail
such as the cosmetics, plastic surgery, and instant food advertisements.EXPLANATION: Please add a comma after \"plastic surgery\" to separate this kind from all of the kinds of advertisement.
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