Advertising costs
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I don\'t know exactly how much I have to pay if I advertise my academy. I haven\'t advertised my academy or something. In the past the price of advertising on newspaper was very expensive. So only big companies used it. Now the most expensive is advertising on TV. We can advertise online with much cheaper prices than those of mass media.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I really appreciate that you did your homework. I agree with you; I know that advertising is expensive. However, I guess social media has played a role in making it cheaper and allowing more unknown products to be advertised.
- T. Caitlyn
I don\'t know exactly how much I have to pay if I advertise my academy.
>> I don\'t know exactly how much I would have to pay to advertise my academy.
I haven\'t advertised my academy or something.
>> CORRECT
In the past the price of advertising on newspaper was very expensive.
>> CORRECT
So only big companies used it.
>> CORRECT
Now the most expensive is advertising on TV.
>> CORRECT
We can advertise online with much cheaper prices than those of mass media.
>> We can advertise online at much cheaper prices than those of mass media.
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