advice
학생이 쓴 원문
Come to think of it, there was a trivial thing
You play the game too long, you can grow up with balanced nutrition
Go to bed early......
It`s like nagging at something that doesn`t really matter.
Most parents want their children to be perfect,
I hope they don`t make a mistakes like me,
But there is more to learn by making mistakes.
I think they wait as long as they love them.
The best advice is to endure and wait for a long time with a warm gaze
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강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Happy Monday. Thank you for doing your homework Keep up the good work. You did marvelous. See you later!
- T. Jasper
- T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
Come to think of it, there was a trivial thing
>> CORRECT
Go to bed early......
>> I told them, \" You\'re playing the game too much.\", \"You should eat nutritious food to grow up.\", or \"Go to bed early\".
>> It sounds like I am nagging for something that doesn\'t matter.
>> Most of the parents just want their children to be perfect.
>> I am hoping that they don\'t make the same mistakes I did.
>> But, there is more to learn from making mistakes.
>> I think they can wait as long as they love them.
>> The best piece of advice is to endure and wait for a long time with a warm gaze.
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