Advice for those who want to marry
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to advise them to find common hobbies or activities which they can do together. Hiking, playing tennis, dancing, traveling, and so on. Even learning a language together is better to improve the relationship.
And I want to recommend having separate accounts and common accounts. For living expense, to have a shared banking account is good way to prevent some arguments or complaints.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree with the advice that you gave. Having the same hobbies or interests can increase and strengthen the relationship of a couple because they have something to talk about and share experiences. Additionally, they can spend time together. I also agree with your advice when it comes to finances.
- T. Caitlyn
I want to advise them to find common hobbies or activities which they can do together.
>> CORRECT
Hiking, playing tennis, dancing, traveling, and so on.
>> CORRECT
Even learning a language together is better to improve the relationship.
>> Even learning a language together can improve the relationship.
And I want to recommend having separate accounts and common accounts.
And I want to recommend having separate accounts and common accounts.
>> CORRECT
For living expense, to have a shared banking account is good way to prevent some arguments or complaints.
>> For living expenses, having a shared banking account can be a good way to prevent arguments or complaints.
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