Advice to high school students

2013-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I recall my high school days, I do not have good memories, but rather gloomy images of the days came to my mind first. I went to the high school that operated the dormitory in which all students had to stay without an exception for three years until graduation. It was the school’s rule. Six students had to live together in one room, sleeping on the floor, not on a single bed. There was a morning and evening formation every day. All students had to get up at 6 o’clock and ran to the playground to attend the assembly. And then we had to practice Taekwondo for about an hour. If you were late to the formation, you would be punished. There were very strict regulations we had to follow such as going to bed 10 o’clock in the evening, wearing school uniforms, straightening the closet, getting an approval to go out the school even on the weekends, etc. It was just like a military boot camp. We had to show respect our seniors by saluting them wherever we ran into them.

강사 첨삭

Hi there SIR [이름]^^ Wow! What an experice! I think even though you didn\'t have any good memories,you still enjoyed studying and being with your friends.A lot of people think that high school is the best time of a person\'s life. Do you agree with that? For me,I had an awesome experiences because I was a member of a group and we were together since first year until fourth year.I will tell you about this story in class. See you later! Keep your ideas flowing.Take Care!Teacher Nina When I recall my high school days, I do not have good memories, but rather gloomy images of the days came to my mind first. >> When I recalled my high school days, I didn\'t have good memories, but rather gloomy images popped into my mind. I went to the high school that operated the dormitory in which all students had to stay without an exception for three years until graduation. >> I went to a high school that operated a dormitory in which all students had to stay without exception for three years until graduation. It was the school’s rule. >> It was the school\'s rule. Six students had to live together in one room, sleeping on the floor, not on a single bed. >> Correct! There was a morning and evening formation every day. >> There was a formation every morning and evening everyday. All students had to get up at 6 o’clock and ran to the playground to attend the assembly. >> All students had to get up at 6 o\'clock and ran to the playground to attend the assembly. And then we had to practice Taekwondo for about an hour. >> Correct! If you were late to the formation, you would be punished. >> If you were late for the formation, you would be punished. There were very strict regulations we had to follow such as going to bed 10 o’clock in the evening, wearing school uniforms, straightening the closet, getting an approval to go out the school even on the weekends, etc. >> We had to follow strict regulations such as going to bed at ten o\'clock in the evening, wearing school uniforms, straightening the closet, getting an approval to go out of the school even on the weekends, etc. It was just like a military boot camp. >> Correct! We had to show respect our seniors by saluting them wherever we ran into them. >> We had to show respect to our seniors by saluting them whenever we ran to them. OR >> We had to show respect to our seniors by saluting them wherever we face them.

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