Aeroplane

2016-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Aeroplane is a transportation which flys through the sky. We ride aeroplane when we are going to other far places like other countries. Some people don't like to ride aeroplane because when you are landing your ears hurt. I've rode aeroplane a lot's of time when we were travelling. At aeroplane I am the one who always sit on the window because Ilike to see outside of the aeroplane. Most of time you see a cloud but you can see the land or ocean. My sister has areoplane sick. I want to be pilot when I get older because I like to ride aeroplane and I'm very iterested in aeroplane. If i be a pilot I can earn some lots of money so I'm going to be rich. When I'm the pilot I want to be control much bigger planes. I really hope that I will be a pilot someday. Do you like to ride aeroplanes, teacher Mayleen?

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN! Happy Tuesday!^^   Sadly, I\'m also suffering from motion sickness just like your sister. That is why I couldn\'t enjoy riding planes, ferries, nor buses. I\'m always anxious that I might vomit or throw up any time. It\'s embarassing.:(   Thank you for this composition, Min. I\'ve read it well.   ~T. Mayleen~   Aeroplane is a transportation which flys through the sky. >> Aeroplane or airplane is an air transportation.   We ride aeroplane when we are going to other far places like other countries. >> We ride airplanes when we\'re going to far places like other countries.   Some people don\'t like to ride aeroplane because when you are landing your ears hurt. >> Some people don\'t like to ride airplanes because of jetlag.   I\'ve rode aeroplane a lot\'s of time when we were travelling. >> I\'ve been on an airplane a lot of times.   At aeroplane I am the one who always sit on the window because Ilike to see outside of the aeroplane. >> I\'m the only one who sits next to the window because I like looking outside.   Most of time you see a cloud but you can see the land or ocean. >> Most of the time, you see clouds but you can also see land or the ocean.   My sister has areoplane sick. >> My sister suffers from motion sickness.   I want to be pilot when I get older because I like to ride aeroplane and I\'m very iterested in aeroplane. >> I want to be a pilot someday because I like riding an airplane and I\'m really interested about it. If i be a pilot I can earn some lots of money so I\'m going to be rich. >> If I\'ll be a pilot, I can earn lots of money.   When I\'m the pilot I want to be control much bigger planes. >> When I become a pilot, I\'d like to control much bigger planes.   I really hope that I will be a pilot someday. >> CORRECT Do you like to ride aeroplanes, teacher Mayleen? >> Do you like to ride airplanes, teacher Mayleen?  

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