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I wonder that K-netizens are interested in Korean itself through such as food and drama.
Those are very small parts and only be showed sensual part.
Of course it is not problem about K-culture but social media itself.
Social media like simple, thoughtless and follower easily instead of people who think deeply and critically.
So more and more there are popular light and sensual such as low class perception in the world.
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Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Kdrama is unbeatable now, a lot of people are so interested in drama created by Koreans. Also, product placement also gives such a strong influence to its viewers. Aside from that, I saw one time in a drama where teenage girls were eating cheesy tteokbokki and to be honest I was curious about what they were eating It made me look up on the internet.
Thanks for this!
Aki~
I wonder that K-netizens are interested in Korean itself through such as food and drama.
>>> I wonder why K-netizens are interested in Korean itself through such as food and drama.
Those are very small parts and only be showed sensual part.
>>> Those are very small parts and only show sensual parts.
Of course it is not problem about K-culture but social media itself.
>>> Of course it is not a problem with K-culture but with social media itself.
Social media like simple, thoughtless and follower easily instead of people who think deeply and critically.
>>> Social media like simple, thoughtless, and followers easily instead of people who think deeply and critically.
So more and more there are popular light and sensual such as low class perception in the world.
>> CORRECT!
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