Affect of newspaper
학생이 쓴 원문
As you know, every press can be true, or it can\'t be.
The contents of the newspaper will give me a lot of information, but they will not have a profound impact on my life.
Rather, books affect my future life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I am all for books as well.
You can really learn a lot and develop yourself.
Let\'s talk about some of the things we have learned from books.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
As you know, every press can be true, or it can\'t be.
>> As you know, there could be real or fake news.
The contents of the newspaper will give me a lot of information, but they will not have a profound impact on my life.
The contents of the newspaper will give me a lot of information, but they will not have a profound impact on my life.
>> Correct
Rather, books affect my future life.
Rather, books affect my future life.
>> Correct
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