African plant

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! ^.^

Happy Monday! ^,^

A wonderful day to you! ^^

Thank to you for sharing this story to me! ^^,

I think we can really cure anything through giving concern or care.

However, we can\'t give this if the person we want to help is not open, but, we can still try.

At first, that person might be shy, so we just need patience to encourage that person to accept the help we are offering.

Humans are innately kind, and for us, it is not a hard thing to do.

Anyway, thanks again for this beautiful story! ^^.

See you very soon! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

A ceretain tree growing in Aftrica called Kachia is one of the plant rooted on the shady ground and lived by only small amount of water and sunlight.

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This plant could die after lingering illness by only minimal touch of someone\'s hand.

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Because it has severe mysophobia that want no touch by someone.

>> I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: It is because it has a severe mysophobia, so it doesn\'t want to be touched by anyone.

>> OR: It is because it has a severe mysophobia which is an abnormal fear of dirt or contamination, so it doesn\'t want to be touched by anyone.

A doctor who has been studied this plant for a long time made it die too many by touching, but finally found out the method how to made it alive.

>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: A doctor who has been studying this plant for a long time made it die too many times by touching, but finally found out the method how to make it alive.

The method is simple enexpectedly.

>>The method is unexpectedly simple. (There is no such word as ENEXPECTEDLY.)

That is a continuous touch everyday, and doing so, it will never die.

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Eventually, Kachia could die easily by simple touch, but live long time by continuous touch with love.

>> Eventually, Kachia could die easily by a simple touch, but it will live for a long time by continuous touch with love. (There should be A before SIMPLE. LONG TIME should be FOR A LONG TIME.)

>> OR: Eventually, Kachia could die easily by a simple touch, but it will live long by continuous touch with love.

That is the same as human.

>> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: That is the same to humans.

A continuous special concern and love can cure despair, depression, and even Autism, leading to hope and joy of hapiness pass through a long dark tunnel.

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You would better look for someone in your neighborhood who need continous your loverly touch like Kachia, and if there were, be a protagonist by doing so.

>> You would better look for someone in your neighborhood who needs continuous lovely touch like Kachia, and if there is, be a protagonist by doing so. (NEED should be NEEDS. YOUR LOVELY should only be LOVELY. IF THERE WERE should be IF THERE WAS.)