after 5 years.
학생이 쓴 원문
I would have change after 5 years.
Maybe I will recognized at the compony and In the house, I have a baby.
And I would move out another house. good and safe place.
5 years, I will be 37, so I\'m thirty yet but I will ready to forty
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Ethan!
I haven\'t seen you in class today but I am grateful for this composition accomplishment. Well, I believe that all these things listed on your 5-year prophecy will all come true. Meanwhile, take one day at a time, enjoy you time with your wife, and live well. Time flies and before you know it, all these have already come true.
Well done! See you in class on Friday!
-T. Donna =)
>> I would have changed after 5 years.
Maybe I will recognized at the compony and In the house, I have a baby.
>> Maybe I will recognized in the compony and in the house, I would have a baby.
And I would move out another house. good and safe place.
>> And I would move out to another house, a better and a safer place.
5 years, I will be 37, so I\'m thirty yet but I will ready to forty.
5 years, I will be 37, so I\'m thirty yet but I will ready to forty.
>> In 5 years, I will be 37, so I\'m thirty yet I will be ready to be forty by then.
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