After an interview
학생이 쓴 원문
I am so nervous because of an interview only in English.
The time of my turn is at 2 P.M. And I'm thrid. Tic-toc, tic-toc. The hands of the clock never stop going on. I have to interview during 20 minutes. Oh, where is my God? First interview is on online. But the online interview end so fast. It just take 10 minutes. Second turn, she goes to the interview room and come back taking only 10 minutes. Now it's my turn....//
I enter the room. Many professors look at me. I sit down. Some still look at me. The others see my application. The oldest professor questiones to me. I answer. He questiones again. I also answer again. And he want me to introduce for 5 minutes. So I say, say, say and end to say. He say 'you remain 2 minutes.' I say my personality to them. And the interview is finished. I'm done. It's easy for me to interview rather than I thoght.//
Now I'm wating for the reslut that I pass.
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Wow, what a challenging experience! I wanna congratulate you that you made it in the interview. I\'m hoping that you will pass, I\'m confident that you will. Thank you for sharing that experience, please keep in mind that if you are sharing past experiences you should be using past tense of verb. Okay? Please review my corrections for you. I hope that you have a good one! See you again tomorrow.
T. Nica ^__^
Here are my corrections for you:
I am so nervous because of an interview only in English.
>> I was so nervous because the interview is in English.The time of my turn is at 2 P.M. And I\'m thrid.
>> My interview was at 2pm and I was the third.
Tic-toc, tic-toc. The hands of the clock never stop going on.
>> Tic-toc-tic-toc, the hands of the clock never stop to go on.
I have to interview during 20 minutes.
>> The duration of my interview is 20 minutes.
Oh, where is my God?
>> Correct
>> OR
>> Oh, where is God?
First interview is on online.
>> My first interview was online.
But the online interview end so fast.
>> But online interview ended so fast.
It just take 10 minutes.
>> It just took 10 minutes
>> OR
>> It only took me 10 minutes.
Second turn, she goes to the interview room and come back taking only 10 minutes.
>> The second interviewee went to the room and came back after 10 minutes.
Now it\'s my turn....//
>>Correct
>> It\'s my turn now.I enter the room.
>> I entered the room.
Many professors look at me.
>> Many professors looked at me.
I sit down.
>> I sat down.
Some still look at me.
>>Some of them was still looking at me.
The others see my application.
>> But some of them checked on my application.
The oldest professor questiones to me.
>> The oldest professor asked me a question.
I answer.
>> I answered.
>> OR
>> I gave him an answer.
He questiones again.
>> He asked me another question.
I also answer again.
>> I answered again.
>> OR
>> I answered for the second time.
And he want me to introduce for 5 minutes.
>> And he wanted me to intorduce myself for 5 minutes.
So I say, say, say and end to say.
>> So, I introduced myself to him.
He say \'you remain 2 minutes.\'
>> He said that there is still 2 minutes remaining.
>> OR
>> He said that I sill have 2 minutes remaining.
I say my personality to them.
>> I shared my personailty to them.
And the interview is finished.
>> The interview was finished.
I\'m done.
>> Correct
>> I\'m done with the interview.
It\'s easy for me to interview rather than I thoght.//
>>The interview was easy for me than what I have thought.
Now I\'m wating for the reslut that I pass.
>> Now, I\'m waiting for the result of the interview. I hope I passed the interview.
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