After being through challenges
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Whether or not a person grows after being through a challenge will depend on his or her attitude toward the challenge. Some gain good lessons from their challenges but others give in to challenges. We have a good saying, \"The earth hardens after it rains\". I try to cope with and learn from challenges like the hardened earth after raining.
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Hi, GI [이름]!
Yes, you are right! I think how a person sees a challenge will have a big effect on whether it will break them or make them stronger. I believe good mental health is essential for changing for the better after overcoming such challenges.
- T. Caitlyn
Whether or not a person grows after being through a challenge will depend on his or her attitude toward the challenge.
>> CORRECT
Some gain good lessons from their challenges but others give in to challenges.
>> CORRECT
We have a good saying, \"The earth hardens after it rains\".
>> CORRECT
I try to cope with and learn from challenges like the hardened earth after raining.
>> I try to cope with and learn from challenges, like the earth hardens after the rain.
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