After Long Vacation

2022-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When thenlong vacation is end, I feel realy sad and depressed. Also I feel empty and I cannot believe the vacation is realy end. After long vacation, I try to adapt to new school class.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

That\'s okay. There are many other things to look forward to when classes start again like meeting your friends and teachers. :)

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When thenlong vacation is end, I feel realy sad and depressed.

>> When a long vacation ends, I feel really sad and depressed.

Also I feel empty and I cannot believe the vacation is realy end.

>> I also feel empty and can\'t believe that the vacation already ended.

After long vacation, I try to adapt to new school class.

>> After a long vacation, I try to adapt to new school classes.

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