After natural disaster….
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Yes. I think world governments do enough to help people after natural disasters. Governments around the world provide financial assistance to rebuild lifesaving, collapsed buildings and more after natural disasters.
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~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. I think world governments do enough to help people after natural disasters.
>>> CORRECT!
Governments around the world provide financial assistance to rebuild lifesaving, collapsed buildings and more after natural disasters.
>>> Governments around the world provide financial assistance to rebuild lifesaving, collapsed buildings, and more after natural disasters.
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