After reading an article of newspaper

Having good friends is a wonderful thing. It's always fun to play with ohter kids. Your friends' genders don't matter. You can be friends with anyone. Always try to be nice to your friends. Just remember that they are very important in your life because make you happy. I agree with this article. It's right that sometimes friend can make us happy but sometimes she or he can make me mad or my friend also can make me cry. My best friend is really good friend. At first i thought she is really bad and unkind girl. Because she seemed she always assume. So I didn't like her. abour 2~3 weeks later she didn't seemed really bad girl. I thought that she had lots of similiar things with me. I sent e-mail to her for being my best friend.

hi cindy, thanks for writing. that's good to hear, at least you guys get along well now. anyway, here are the corrections to your compostion.    here's your original compostion:   Having good friends is a wonderful thing. It's always fun to play with ohter kids. Your friends' genders don't matter. You can be friends with anyone. Always try to be nice to your friends. Just remember that they are very important in your life because make you happy.I agree with this article. It's right that sometimes friend can make us happy but sometimes she or he can make me mad or my friend also can make me cry. My best friend is really good friend. At first i thought she is really bad and unkind girl. Because she seemed she always assume. So I didn't like her. abour 2~3 weeks later she didn't seemed really bad girl. I thought that she had lots of similiar things with me. I sent e-mail to her for being my best friend.   here's the corrected compostion:   Having good friends is a wonderful thing. It's always fun to play with ohter kids. Your friends' genders don't matter. You can be friends with anyone. Always try to be nice to your friends. Just remember that they are very important in your life because make you happy.I agree with this article. It's right that sometimes a friend can make us happy but sometimes she or he can make us mad or our friend can also can make us cry. My best friend is a really good friend. At first i thought she was a really bad and unkind girl. Because she seemed she always assumes everything. So I didn't like her. about 2~3 weeks later she didn't seem like a really bad girl. I thought that she had lots of similiar things with me. I sent an e-mail to her for being my best friend.