After sales service
학생이 쓴 원문
When we purchase furniture, home appliances,or electronic devices, we consider after-sales services as well as the quality and prices. We Koreans are accustomed to good after sales services, so we can hardly buy something without good after sales services. Even though many products made in China are cheaper, we will choose Korean products because of after sales services. Of course, we can sometimes cheap Chinese products if they don\'t need complicated after sales services.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. You did great! I just want to explain why I needed to correct “after-sales services” to “after-sales service.” ‘After-sales service’ means general support after buying a product. ‘After-sales services’ means specific types of support, like delivery or repairs.
- T. Caitlyn
When we purchase furniture, home appliances,or electronic devices, we consider after-sales services as well as the quality and prices.
>> When we purchase furniture, home appliances, or electronic devices, we consider after-sales service as well as quality and price.
We Koreans are accustomed to good after sales services, so we can hardly buy something without good after sales services.
>> We Koreans are accustomed to good after-sales service, so we can hardly buy something without it.
Even though many products made in China are cheaper, we will choose Korean products because of after sales services.
>> Even though many products made in China are cheaper, we will choose Korean products because of after-sales service.
Of course, we can sometimes cheap Chinese products if they don\'t need complicated after sales services.
>> Of course, we can sometimes buy cheap Chinese products if they don’t require complicated after-sales service.
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