After the betrayal
학생이 쓴 원문
After I noticed my former sister-in-law\'s embezzlement, I fired her. I did everything instead of her. For two years, my youngest brother shared my work partly. He was looking for a job after he failed in his own business. He wanted to start his own academy, so he wanted to experience and earn some money in my academy. After he found his job, I did everything with my daughters\' help.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this with me. I am happy that you were able to trust again despite what happened with your sister-in-law. Also, I can see that you have a great support system like your brother and daughters who helped you during that time.
- T. Caitlyn
After I noticed my former sister-in-law\'s embezzlement, I fired her.
>> CORRECT
I did everything instead of her.
>> CORRECT
For two years, my youngest brother shared my work partly.
>> CORRECT
He was looking for a job after he failed in his own business.
>> CORRECT
He wanted to start his own academy, so he wanted to experience and earn some money in my academy.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: He wanted to start his own academy, so he sought to gain experience and earn some money by working in my academy
After he found his job, I did everything with my daughters\' help.
>> CORRECT
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