After trip to Guam

Hello there!^.^

Thank you for sharing your experience in Guam!^.^

While I was reading, I was amazed with the information you had said and the way you wrote was really convincing!^.^

I feel like going there, too!kkk

Anyhow, if you have some questions about the corrections, feel free to ask them in class.

See you!

~~Teacher Nina~~

Guam is a small country that has an area of 549 square meters.

>> Correct.

The island of Guam is 48 kms long and 6 to 19 kms wide, 3/4 the size of Singapore.

>> Correct.

Actually, Guam is not a country, but it is part of the U.S. territory.

>> Correct.

Guam is a small island located in the western Pacific Ocean, so it has so many beautiful beaches.

>> Correct.

The most exciting thing for me was driving along the coast.

>> Correct.

I could see the beautiful beaches and the blue colored ocean just besides me along the roads.

>> I could see the beautiful beaches and the blue colored ocean just beside me along the roads.

There was a beach just in front of the hotel we stayed.

>> Correct.

Water was clean and warm.

>> The water was clean and warm.

We enjoyed swimming there and there were a lot of colorful fish around us.

>> Correct. [schools of fish]

Some tourists say that Guam is also a good place for shopping.

>> Correct.

There were many famous restaurants.

>> Correct.

We went to some of them and enjoyed steaks, ribs, spaghettis, and fried shrimps.

>> Correct.

Above all, travel itself makes us feel excited and happy regardless where we go or what we do there.

>> Above all, the trip itself made us feel happy regardless of where we had been or what we did there.

Isn’t it amazing that we escape from our daily routine and experience exotic things?

>> Isn\'t it amazing that we have escaped from our daily routine to experience exotic things?