After Vacation

It is little cold now. So,I knew the fall is coming! Fall is the best season to enjoy outdoor activities. Well,It also means a new beginning. Many of my classmates grew taller during the vacation. I grew a little taller as well. But,one of my clasmates grew three centimetors! She said she drank three glasses of milk every day. She also did exercise at least two times a week. These days,I'm drinking lots of milk. I also try to stay active. So,I felt I grew taller!

Hi there! I am sure you have grown taller already! You drank so much milk! That makes me smile as I read your composition. Good job! Thank you for making me smile today. I can\'t wait to see you in class. Take care. -----T. Jane------   It is little cold now. >>>It is a little cold now. So,I knew the fall is coming! >>>CORRECT Fall is the best season to enjoy outdoor activities. >>>CORRECTWell,It also means a new beginning. >>>CORRECTMany of my classmates grew taller during the vacation. >>>CORRECTI grew a little taller as well. >>>CORRECTBut,one of my clasmates grew three centimetors! >>>But one of my classmates grew three centimeters more.She said she drank three glasses of milk every day. >>>CORRECTShe also did exercise at least two times a week. >>>CORRECTThese days,I\'m drinking lots of milk. >>>CORRECTI also try to stay active. >>>CORRECTSo,I felt I grew taller! >>>CORRECT >>>OR So, I feel that I have grown taller!