Aftereffect
학생이 쓴 원문
After travled in Hawaii, I keep feeling tired.
I need to take a rest for a day.
If I travel again, I want to stop drinking and make oneself comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Daniel! ^-^ Happy Tuesday!
Thank you for this composition.
I guess the reason why you always feel tired is because you were gone for two weeks (if I am not wrong). You got used to waking up late or not doing paperwork the whole day.
Just take care of yourself. See you tomorrow!
_T. Mayleen :)
After travled in Hawaii, I keep feeling tired.
>>> After my trip to Hawaii, I always feel tired.
I need to take a rest for a day.
>>> Correct!
If I travel again, I want to stop drinking and make oneself comfortable.
>>> If I travel again, I\'d avoid drinking alcohol and just relax.
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