Afterschoolclass was end
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! You just made me hungry with that mayo chicken.
It sounds delicious.
Eat a lot for dinner because I know you\'re hungry. ^^
See you on Thursday! ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Today afterschoolclass was ended.And,we had a test.
>> Today, the afterschool class ended and we had a test.
>> or:Today, the afterschool class finished and we took a test.
And math test score was 35.
>> I got the score of 35 in Math.
After test,teacher gave us lunch.It was Hansot.
>> After the test, our teacher treated us lunch. It was in Hansot restaurant.
It is like a lunchbox.
>> correct
I ate chicken maynaise.
>> I ate chicken with mayonnaise.
>> or: I ate mayo chicken.
From next day,I don\'t have to get up early.
>> On the next day, I don\'t have to get up early.
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