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학생이 쓴 원문
Today it’s cleared up and bright. Sun is shinning like it's burning.
The sun light reflected on the leaves looks like glittering gold.
God’s grace is wonderful and amazing!
The fig tree, which I planted its little sapling last year,has thrived but no fruit at all. this reminds me of the Bible story of the fig tree cursed by Jesus due to having no fruit. Its thick shadow only hinders the other plant to grow.
The bunches of grapes droop down from its vine as they are growing bigger. it looks like a picture to see them behind the blue sky through my wondow. So peaceful! I am growing several trees in my plot.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]!
I'm glad that you are enjoying the weather today. I guess you'll be busy again with your garden today. Have fun and tell me about it tomorrow. Godbless!!
Lei :-)
Today it’s cleared up and bright.
>>correct!!
Sun is shinning like it's burning.>>The sun is shining like it’s burning.
The sunlight reflected on the leaves looks like glittering gold.>>correct!!
God’s grace is wonderful and amazing! >>correct!!
The fig tree, which I planted its little sapling last year,has thrived but no fruit at all.
>>correct!!
this reminds me of the Bible story of the fig tree cursed by Jesus due to having no fruit.
>>correct!!
Its thick shadow only hinders the other plants to grow. >>correct!!
The bunches of grapes drop down from its vine as they are growing bigger.
>>correct!!
it looks like a picture to see them behind the blue sky through my window.
>>correct!!
So peaceful!
>>correct!!
I am growing several trees in my plot.
>>correct!!
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