Again, You did give me two homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.1 : What kind of organization are you dreaming of creating?
A.1 : I should wish to make a teamwork of organization. The maintenance of aircraft has to demand that we will be become one. so, I will try to create one of team for safe of aircraft
Q.2 : What are the most common organizations in your country and what are they for?
A.2 : We have a lot of organizations in Korea. For example class reunion, labor union, Incheon international airport corporation. They exist & pursue for the common good and goals.
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Indeed, [이름]! Teamwork is important for a group to become successful. May you achieve your plans!-Faith-
Q.1 : What kind of organization are you dreaming of creating?>> CORRECT
A.1 : I should wish to make a teamwork of organization.
A.1 : I should wish to make a teamwork of organization.
>> A.1 : I should wish to have teamwork in an organization.
The maintenance of aircraft has to demand that we will be become one.
>> The maintenance of aircraft has demanded that we should become one.
so, I will try to create one of team for safe of aircraft
>> So, I will try to create one team for the safety of our aircrafts.
Q.2 : What are the most common organizations in your country and what are they for?
>> So, I will try to create one team for the safety of our aircrafts.
Q.2 : What are the most common organizations in your country and what are they for?
>> CORRECT
A.2 : We have a lot of organizations in Korea.
A.2 : We have a lot of organizations in Korea.
>> CORRECT
OR There are various organizations in Korea.
For example class reunion, labor union, Incheon international airport corporation.
>> For example, class reunion, labor union, Incheon international airport corporation, etc.
They exist & pursue for the common good and goals.
>> They exist and pursue their goals for the common good.
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