Age
학생이 쓴 원문
As I\'m getting older, I could recognize and distinguish people who are going to affect good or bad things.
For the people not easy to having a good relationship, try not to reveal how I feel uncomfortable when I\'m with them.
Because I have to care about their feeling as well.
But I\'m building some thought in my life and I realized that I don\'t need to care everyone.
강사 첨삭
I didn\'t know these!
As I\'m getting older, I could recognize and distinguish people who are going to affect good or bad things.
>> As I\'m getting older, I could recognize and distinguish people who are going to affect my life in a good or a bad way.
For the people not easy to having a good relationship, try not to reveal how I feel uncomfortable when I\'m with them.
>> For people who are not having an easy time having a good relationship, I try not to reveal how uncomfortable I feel when I\'m with them.
Because I have to care about their feeling as well.
>> It is because I have to care about their feelings as well.
But I\'m building some thought in my life and I realized that I don\'t need to care everyone.
>> I\'m building some thought in my life and I realized that I don\'t need to care about everyone.
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