Age gap beneficial and hindrance
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two groups in my office. A junior group is 30`s and a senior group is over 40`s. Juniors do annoying things like cleaning the pantry.
One of age gap hindrance ,In general, group of age gap have different interest in. I feel invisible wall with the groups. So we don`t communicate closely.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Tom!
I think it\'s natural for different age groups to have varying interests and communication styles, which can sometimes create a feeling of distance or an \'invisible wall.\' However, this diversity can also be beneficial, as it brings different perspectives and experiences to the workplace.
~ Trixia
Content:
There are two groups in my office.
- CORRECT.
A junior group is 30`s and a senior group is over 40`s.
- A junior group is in their 30\'s, and a senior group is over 40\'s.
Juniors do annoying things like cleaning the pantry.
- CORRECT.
One of age gap hindrance ,In general, group of age gap have different interest in.
- One of the age gap hindrances is that, in general, groups with different age gaps have different interests.
I feel invisible wall with the groups.
- I feel an invisible wall with the groups.
So we don`t communicate closely.
- CORRECT.
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