Age in friendship

2016-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Wine and friends improve with age. Familiar paths and old friends are the best. These are the proverb. Friend is simliiar to hobby, shared the emotion, understand each other. Sometimes cheer up to encourage and support. Therefore people makes friend the similar age. In fact, if it is much to age difference, it's hard to become a friend. Because it doesn't hard to share the emotion and the value and the goal. Especially Korean society is very authoritative and ordering, and so it doesn't hard to make a friend and to overcome a age difference. But there are the persons whom overcome the age difference and make a friends. They respect and regard each other. It is not impossible. It is really a grim possibility. Finally, to make a friend is greatly influenced by social and cultural.

강사 첨삭

Hello sir,

I guess we could make a lot of friends no matter the age but to make a really close friend is hard. You know we have friends but mostly we only make acquaintances. I understand your point though. See you on Wednesday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

Wine and friends improve with age.

>>correct!

Familiar paths and old friends are the best.

>>correct!

These are the proverb.

>>These are proverbs.

Friend is simliiar to hobby, shared the emotion, understand each other.

>>A friend has similar hobby, whom you have shared your emotions with so you understand each other.

Sometimes cheer up to encourage and support.

>>Someone who cheers you up and support you.

Therefore people makes friend the similar age.

>>Therefore people makes friends with similar age.

In fact, if it is much to age difference, it\'s hard to become a friend.

>>In fact, if the age difference is too much, it\'s hard to become friends.

Because it doesn\'t hard to share the emotion and the value and the goal.

>>Because it\'s hard to share the emotion, the value and the goal.

Especially Korean society is very authoritative and ordering, and so it doesn\'t hard to make a friend and to overcome a age difference.

>>Especially in Korean society where it is very authoritative and ordering, and so it is hard to make friends and overcome the age difference.

But there are the persons whom overcome the age difference and make a friends.

>>But there are people who can overcome the age difference and be friends.

They respect and regard each other. It is not impossible.

>>correct!

It is really a grim possibility.

>>correct!

Finally, to make a friend is greatly influenced by social and cultural.

>>Finally, making friends is greatly influenced by society and culture.

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