Age of working in the society

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Here are my corrections for you:

In my country, we have some restrictions for teenagers and more younger than teens.

>> In my country, we have some restrictions for teenagers and for those younger than teenagers.
The age that people can have their own jobs is one of these.

>> ( I\'m sorry [이름], I don\'t quite understand this sentence. ) Maybe you mean \"They cannot get their own job at that age.\"
So, people can usually work when they are about to become adults.

>> So, people can usually work when they are almost an adult.
I think the age which people start to work in my country is from 20-year-old.

>> I think the age which people start to work in my country is from the age of 20 years old.