aging
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The good thing about getting older is that I have more room in my [이름]d.
After marriage, I raised my children and worked as a war.
In some ways, I feel like I started a second life.
The bad thing is that the [이름]d is the same, but the appearance is getting old.
One day, when I looked in the mirror I see a stranger.
Moreover, there are some sick places and empty nest syndrome is giving me a hard time
How do you feel about getting older?
강사 첨삭
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T. Jasper
After marriage, I raised my children and worked as a war.
In some ways, I feel like I started a second life.
The bad thing is that the [이름]d is the same, but the appearance is getting old.
One day, when I looked in the mirror I see a stranger.
Moreover, there are some sick places and empty nest syndrome is giving me a hard time
How do you feel about getting older?
T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
The good thing about getting older is that I have more room in my [이름]d.
The good thing about getting older is that I have more room in my [이름]d.
>> CORRECT
>> After marriage, I raised my children and worked like I was in a war.
>> CORRECT
>> The bad thing is that the [이름]d is the same but, getting old also changes appearance.
>> One day, when I looked at the mirror I saw stranger.
>> Moreover, there are many sickness and the feeling of emptiness is giving me a hard time.
>> CORRECT
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