aging society
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people worry about new phenomenon to become fast to aging society.
Middle age people whose parents are over 90 years old parent still alive have hard time in their middle age life.
The reason is burden and oblige to continuing care diseased parents.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
I understand what you mean here. It became a problem too in the Philippines. However, if the living parents have a pension, they don\'t worry who will take care of them^^\'
I understand what you mean here. It became a problem too in the Philippines. However, if the living parents have a pension, they don\'t worry who will take care of them^^\'
See you!
Aki~
Many people worry about new phenomenon to become fast to aging society.
>>> Many people worry about a new phenomenon that is occurring rapidly in an aging society.
Middle age people whose parents are over 90 years old parent still alive have hard time in their middle age life.
>>> Middle-aged people whose parents are over 90 years old and are still alive have a hard time in their middle age life.
The reason is burden and oblige to continuing care diseased parents.
>>> The reason is the burden and obligation to continue care for diseased parents.
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