Agree

2013-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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I agree with this statement. Because I have that kind of an experience. Almost two years ago, I had chance to go America for two weeks. But I had to go alone. It was backpacking travel. Of course, I was afraid of that. Also, I got stress for preparing alone. However, now I think it was a valuable experience and it was beeter to go alone. Because I learned many lessons. One of them is an independent spirit. And I can have " I can do it " feeling. So, I recommend to do some dificult eexperiences.

강사 첨삭

Hi! A happy day to all of us!^^
Thanks a lot for sending this in.^^
\"If you always do your best, you will be free from regrets.\"
Let us both do our best in our classes.^^
See you!

I agree with this statement.
>>Correct!
Because I have that kind of an experience.
>>Because I\'ve experienced this before.
Almost two years ago, I had chance to go America for two weeks.
>>Almost two years ago, I had the chance to go to America and I stayed there for two weeks.
But I had to go alone.

>>Correct

It was backpacking travel.
>>It was a backpack travel.
Of course, I was afraid of that.

>>Correct!

Also, I got stress for preparing alone.
>>Also, I got stressed with the preparations that I had to do by myself.
However, now I think it was a valuable experience and it was beeter to go alone.
>>However, now I think that it was a valuable experience of mine and it was better for me to go alone then.
Because I learned many lessons.
>>Correct!
One of them is an independent spirit.
>>One of them is having an independent spirit.
And I can have \" I can do it \" feeling.
>>I can have this so-called \"I can do it\" feeling.
So, I recommend to do some dificult eexperiences.

>>So I recommend others to take/accept challenges.

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