(Agree/Disagree) It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.

2018-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I disagree with that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. We learn about a human relationship in a various global culture. I think that childhood is important to form their personality for children. Commonly, big cities are easier than countryside for experiencing to develop thier own values. Likewise, grown-up travels worldwide to experience global culture. It broaden their's views or traveling may give the answer to us when we meet the limit. As a result, it is not only better for people but also chileren to live in a big city than the countryside.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!


I sincerely appreciate your answer. I also agree that living in a big city helps us learn about the various global culture easily. It also helps us meet opportunities that we\'ll never find in the countryside.


Thank you, once again. See you tomorrow and always take care! ^^


~Teacher Gina



I disagree with that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
We learn about a human relationship in a various global culture.
I think that childhood is important to form their personality for children.
Commonly, big cities are easier than countryside for experiencing to develop thier own values.
Likewise, grown-up travels worldwide to experience global culture.
It broaden their\'s views or traveling may give the answer to us when we meet the limit.
As a result, it is not only better for people but also chileren to live in a big city than the countryside.


>> I disagree with the statement that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.

We learn about human relationship in various global culture.

I think that childhood is important to form the personality of children.

Commonly, big cities are easier to live in to develop their own values than in the countryside.

Likewise, grown-ups travel worldwide to experience global culture.

It broaden their views and traveling may give the answers to us when we meet our limits.

As a result, it is not only better for people but also children to live in a big city than the countryside.

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