Agust 14th homework

2024-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t like watching suspense movies because I easily gets scared. I enjoy thrilling roller costers at the amusement park. Gangnam has a lot of entertainment to enjoy. The goverment should study the mechanism to reduce drunk driving.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],


Excellent job. I don’t like watching suspense movies too. ^^


-Teacher Ash


I don\'t like watching suspense movies because I easily gets scared.

>>I don\'t like watching suspense movies because I easily get scared.


I enjoy thrilling roller costers at the amusement park.

>>I enjoy thrilling roller coasters at the amusement park.


Gangnam has a lot of entertainment to enjoy.

>>CORRECT

 OR >> Gangnam has a lot of entertainment to offer.


The goverment should study the mechanism to reduce drunk driving.

>>The government should study the mechanism to reduce drunk driving.

OR

>>The government needs to explore methods to minimize drunk driving.


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