Agust 14th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Excellent job. I don’t like watching suspense movies too. ^^
-Teacher Ash
I don\'t like watching suspense movies because I easily gets scared.
>>I don\'t like watching suspense movies because I easily get scared.
I enjoy thrilling roller costers at the amusement park.
>>I enjoy thrilling roller coasters at the amusement park.
Gangnam has a lot of entertainment to enjoy.
>>CORRECT
OR >> Gangnam has a lot of entertainment to offer.
The goverment should study the mechanism to reduce drunk driving.
>>The government should study the mechanism to reduce drunk driving.
OR
>>The government needs to explore methods to minimize drunk driving.
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