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2018-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Directions: Use the following words in a complete sentence. 1. bank:I scare of bank..... 2. restaurant:I like restaurant. 3. monster:I don't like 100000 eye monster!!! 4. shopping:I will go shoping at hwaii(?) 5. fighting:-______________________________-

강사 첨삭

Hey there, Violet!!^-^
How are you doing over there?
Very good in doing your homework but it could be better if you will try and answer all.
I will see you tomorrow.

~ T. Lorna^____^

1. bank:I scare of bank.....
>>  I\'m scared to go to bank.
2. restaurant:I like restaurant.
>> I like restaurants.
3. monster:I don\'t like 100000 eye monster!!!
>> I don\'t like 100000 eyed monster.
4. shopping:I will go shoping at hwaii(?)
>> I will go shopping in Hawaii.
5. fighting:-______________________________-
>> I don\'t like fighting.

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