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2011-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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I've seen the movie 'Letters to juliet' many times for listening practice. I love its o.s.t. The American girl who wants to be a writer traveled in Verona with her fiance like a pre-honeymoon. But her man was busy not enjoying with her but preparing to run his own business. He made her alone. The girl having much time accidently looked for the old British woman's first lover with her grandson. They were getting closer each other. After some episodes, the british man finally proposed to her. I was so impressive about his words then. He was proud of his city, London, where he loves living much. But if she waited for him on the other side, leaving London would be his pleasure and he would be willing to go to her. This movie makes me get fantasy. Please catch my too highly flying ideal.

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Hi [이름]! I haven’t seen this movie. Maybe I’ll try to get a DVD one of these days and I'll watch it. It sounds very romantic. You can use their names so you won't have a hard time elaborating the characters.kk^^ I'm sorry [이름], I get in the office around 5:30pm your time and sometimes I miss to check your composition at home. So, I guess you recognize how I normally correct your compositions, if you know what I mean. -Tiny^0^ I've seen the movie 'Letters to juliet' many times for listening practice. >> I've seen the movie 'Letters to Juliet' many times for listening practice. I love its o.s.t. >>CORRECT. The American girl who wants to be a writer traveled in Verona with her fiance like a pre-honeymoon. >> The American girl who wants to be a writer traveled to Verona with her fiance like it’s their pre-honeymoon. But her man was busy not enjoying with her but preparing to run his own business. He made her alone.  >> But the man was busy and not enjoying with her, but preparing to run his own business. He made her feel left alone. The girl having much time accidently looked for the old British woman's first lover with her grandson. >> The girl having much time accidentally met an old British woman and helped her look for her first lover. >>(You can use their names so you won't have a hard time.) They were getting closer each other. >> They were getting closer to each other. After some episodes, the british man finally proposed to her. >> CORRECT. I was so impressive about his words then. >> I was so impressed  with his words then. He was proud of his city, London, where he loves living much. >> He was proud of his city, London, where he loves living in. But if she waited for him on the other side, leaving London would be his pleasure and he would be willing to go to her. >>CORRECT.This movie makes me get fantasy. >> This movie makes me fantasize. Please catch my too highly flying ideal. >> CORRECT.

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