AI technologies
학생이 쓴 원문
The importamce of SW technology is going high day by day and the enormous growth of stock price in AI industry is representative these situations.
AI technologies can make in-car environment human-friendly in terms of offering autonomous driving and customized services.
Although it is not an easy work to realize smart in-car environment in near future, it can help customers to think that car is not only for driving, but also for entertainment.
In these reasons, I am excited about driving with just talking to AI.
After 4~5 years later, which is the time that I think about my own car, I will reflect AI quality to my buying decision.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name] [이름]! I love your take on the growing importance of SW technology and the potential for AI in the automotive industry. The idea of a smart in-car environment making driving more than just a commute is fascinating. Looking forward to seeing how AI influences your car-buying decisions in the future!
~T. Jenna
The importamce of SW technology is going high day by day and the enormous growth of stock price in AI industry is representative these situations.
>>The importance of software (SW) technology is going high / increasing day by day, and the significant growth in the stock prices within the AI industry is indicative of these circumstances.
AI technologies can make in-car environment human-friendly in terms of offering autonomous driving and customized services.
AI technologies can make in-car environment human-friendly in terms of offering autonomous driving and customized services.
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>>AI technologies can transform the in-car environment, making it more human-friendly by providing autonomous driving and customized services.
Although it is not an easy work to realize smart in-car environment in near future, it can help customers to think that car is not only for driving, but also for entertainment.
Although it is not an easy work to realize smart in-car environment in near future, it can help customers to think that car is not only for driving, but also for entertainment.
>>Although it is not an easy work to realize smart in-car environment in the near future, it can help customers to think that cars are not only for driving, but also as sources of entertainment.
In these reasons, I am excited about driving with just talking to AI.
>>For these reasons, I am excited about driving while just talking to AI.
After 4~5 years later, which is the time that I think about my own car, I will reflect AI quality to my buying decision.
After 4~5 years later, which is the time that I think about my own car, I will reflect AI quality to my buying decision.
>>After 4 to 5 years, which is when I anticipate considering my own car, I will factor in the quality of AI in my purchasing decision.
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