Air conditioning!
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday,I had fever!
My temperature is 38.2 degrees Celsius.
And I had headache and stomachache,too!
So today I went to the hospital.
Doctor says"It's an 'Air conditioning'!
Therefore, I should drink warm water, and take medicine!
강사 첨삭
Oh my! I feel bad for you. Are you feeling much better now? I hope so. Better get some rest and take your medicine regularly so that you\'d feel a lot better soon. Well, you can\'t do away with air conditioners since it\'s really hot. I really hope you\'d feel better soon.
T. Meg
Yesterday,I had fever!
>>Correct!
>>I had a fever yesterday. (better)My temperature is 38.2 degrees Celsius.bad
>>Correct!And I had headache and stomachache,too!
>>I had a headache and stomachache too!So today I went to the hospital.
>>Correct!Doctor says\"It\'s an \'Air conditioning\'!
>>The doctor said, \"It\'s because of the air conditioning!\"Therefore, I should drink warm water, and take medicine!
>>Correct!
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