Air conditioning!

2012-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Yesterday,I had fever! My temperature is 38.2 degrees Celsius. And I had headache and stomachache,too! So today I went to the hospital. Doctor says"It's an 'Air conditioning'! Therefore, I should drink warm water, and take medicine!

강사 첨삭

Oh my! I feel bad for you. Are you feeling much better now? I hope so. Better get some rest and take your medicine regularly so that you\'d feel a lot better soon. Well, you can\'t do away with air conditioners since it\'s really hot. I really hope you\'d feel better soon. T. Meg Yesterday,I had fever! >>Correct! >>I had a fever yesterday. (better)My temperature is 38.2 degrees Celsius.bad >>Correct!And I had headache and stomachache,too! >>I had a headache and stomachache too!So today I went to the hospital. >>Correct!Doctor says\"It\'s an \'Air conditioning\'! >>The doctor said, \"It\'s because of the air conditioning!\"Therefore, I should drink warm water, and take medicine! >>Correct!

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