Air Rocket
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I understand how you feel about what happened.
It would be better to postpone the class an hour before or better yet earlier than that.
Somehow I felt bad about what happened.
Maybe you can tell your mom what your activities will be.
Good luck with your rocket contest and your upcoming test.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I have to make air rocket but I went to home because of this class.
>> I have to make an air rocket, but I went home because of this class.
I went home but the computer was not turned on.
>> I went home, but the computer was not turned on.
So,I called my mom for 12times but my mom didn\'t responded.And 13times she responded.
>> So I called my mom about 12 times, but my mom didn\'t respond and she only answered my call on the 13th time.
And she tell the computer code.
>> She then told me the computer code.
I was really angry.
>> correct
And today I was sleepy too.
>> correct
The rocket contest is this Saturday.
>> correct
>> or: The rocket contest will be on Saturday.
So, I have to practice with my partner today.
>> correct
But I can go now.
>> But I can\'t go now.
I have a class at 7 and after this class is at 5:35.And it takes 35minutes to go his house.
>> I have a class at 7 pm and I usually finish this class at 5:35 pm. It takes 35 minutes to go to his house.
When I go to his house I can stay at home for 30minutes.So,I can\'t go.
>> When I go to his house, I can only stay there for 30 minutes, so I can\'t go now.
And during the Power English class the computer was turned off.I want to say it is not my fault.The computer was turned off suddenly.I don\'t do that on purpose.
>> And during our class, the computer suddenly turned off and I want to say that it\'s not my fault. The computer turned off suddenly and I didn\'t do it on purpose.
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