Airplanes are very important.
학생이 쓴 원문
Airplanes are very important. This is because airplanes are a great way to travel comfortably in many countries. And the airplane is a big, heavy thing that flies, so I think it\'s a really big invention. International trade can also be done well thanks to airplanes. I actually don\'t know much about the history of airplanes. But I know that the Wright brothers created the first airplane.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Airplanes are very important.
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This is because airplanes are a great way to travel comfortably in many countries.
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And the airplane is a big, heavy thing that flies, so I think it\'s a really big invention.
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International trade can also be done well thanks to airplanes.
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I actually don\'t know much about the history of airplanes.
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But I know that the Wright brothers created the first airplane.
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